Michael Barry waxes poetic on raceday in Plouay
This one might be a tad over the top, but it's Michael Barry.
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Christopher See
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So kindly put
I skimmed through hoping that he was going to get to some sort of point and suddenly I was at the bottom of the page.
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“It seems like the heart of French cycling might be in Plouay”
cue for editing . . .
when three paragraphs IN A ROW begin with similes straining after literary effect, it’s time to sit the boy down with a nice latte and a tattered copy of Strunk and White.
(Or, perhaps, a sheaf of old Dan Jenkins or Bud Shrake articles).
yeah, if only Leonard Cohen had had a copy of S/W when he was writing “Bird on a wire,” he could have avoided those pitfalls ;)
I'm feverished, or the way you want to spell it
by plinytheelder on Aug 28, 2009 12:22 PM EDT up reply actions
Velonews is not the New York Times
Which is no excuse. Assuming they have the ability, and maybe that is too much to assume, they might not dare to edit Barry’s article.
Staring at the swim team gets you killed by a gang of dancing ninja men who know how to twirl.
I guess I’m in the minority, but I found that absolutely lovely. What’s great about it to me is that he captures the spirit that only a kind of minor/secondary race like Plouay can have. Winning isn’t going to make you a living legend, and hence the race becomes less about the victory than the day itself – its duration, which a bike race is alone among sports at being able to do.
I'm feverished, or the way you want to spell it
yeah, but I got as much of that from your quietly understated summary
as from his intrusive and distracting “dull knife” metaphors.













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